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Keith Long's avatar

Eeeexxcellent.

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Jennifer James's avatar

Thanks Keith! :) Glad you enjoyed it.

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Matthew K's avatar

It was like a midwestern Tell Tale Heart. Absolutely loved it. You’re a modern day Poe.

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Jennifer James's avatar

You have to say that, because you're my friend. But I still love to hear it. Thank you.

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Matthew K's avatar

Nope. Even of my friends I’m critical. Your stories, however, win me over 10 fold every time.

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Jennifer James's avatar

Bless you.

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Great stuff Jennifer. Loved it. Midwest is all its own. - Jim

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Jennifer James's avatar

It really is.

Thank you for reading and commenting, Jim. Readers like you keep me going.

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Parker McCoy's avatar

Haha. Lyla got a reckoning all right. I like how everything played out. I was thinking she'd get caught but I was not thinking that. Thank you for sharing, Jennifer.

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Jennifer James's avatar

You're very welcome, Parker. Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. :)

And thanks for the restack!

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