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Pages After Dark's avatar

Your writing really makes the story more gripping. Great premise delivered well by great writing. Keep writing, fellow writer!

Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you! I appreciate you reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Keith Long's avatar

Love it. It’s very you

Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you Keith :)

Love to have you reading.

Liz Zimmers's avatar

Oh, Pamela… Such a great story!

Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you Liz, and thank you for reading and restacking!

Pamela is her own worst enemy.

Alexandra Wendt's avatar

Ooooh this was so eerie! Loved the visuals, particularly at the end.

Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you so much Alex! Glad you liked it.

I enjoyed playing with the visuals on this one.