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Keith Long's avatar

Fantastic. Huge world in a short piece.

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Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you so much Keith. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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Steve Thomas's avatar

Thank you for such a great story…real people in a real world…that’s tough to pull off: Kudos!

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Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you for reading Steve. I appreciate the compliment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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Jean McKinney's avatar

Great Valentine piece. You do action really well - and the characters are vividly real. Makes you hope they really do find a better life.

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Jennifer James's avatar

Thank you Jean! I love character building.

In my head, they make it to a better place.

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